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Inner Demons by IIICrewsalonian Inner Demons by IIICrewsalonian
[NOTICE: This is an alternate scenario. In this scenario, Luna is the older sister and Celestia is the younger. Celestia was angry that the ponies of Equestria were disregarding her Sun's use. Angry that all they saw it was was a blinding, burning, and hateful light. Therefore, she became Solar Flare, attempting to wrap Equestria in an eternal, burning day.]




Luna emerged as the six mares looked up in reverence. They gasp. "Princess Luna!"

"I told you that you needed to make some friends, nothing more. I saw the signs of Solar Flare's return and I knew it was you who had the magic inside to defeat her, but you could not unleash it until you let true friendship into your heart. Now if only another will as well." She sighed and looked over at the small white mare. "Princess Celestia..."

Celestia looked up fearful. She gasped and backed away fearfully, stepping on broken pieces of her former armor. 

Luna pitied the sighed and knelt down to the smaller mare. "My little sister, it has been a thousand years since I have seen you like this. Time to put our differences behind us. We were meant to rule together. The moon for me, and the sun for you. Sister... I love you. I miss you. I don't want us to fight any longer."

The six mares widened their eyes. "Sister?!"

"Yes... this is Princess Celestia. My dearest sister and best friend. I regretted the very day I had to leave her." Luna replied and looked Celestia in the eyes. "Please... Will you accept my friendship again?"

Celestia nods and tears up. "Sister, I'm so sorry... Lu Lu... I'm so so sorry..." She stands and hugs Luna.

Luna smiles. "Shh... its alright, Tia... I've got you now. I won't let anything happen to you ever again."

Celestia smiled, but frowns slightly again, feeling an eerie feeling over her. She knew that within her, a demon lurked. Though she was no longer that Solar Flare, she felt horrible. Unwelcomed. Shamed. She kept a smile on though to make her sister happy, because that... that was what she longed for. To see her sister after 1000 long years of solitude.





Vectors Credited:
--Twilight 
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--Fluttershy
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--Rarity
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--Pinkie Pie
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--Applejack 
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--Rainbow Dash
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--Luna
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--Celestia
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--Solar Flare
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:iconpsychoyellowdragon:
PsychoYellowDragon Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Celestia is so cute as a role reversal ^_^ i want to hug her! 
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! It was just a small thought I had for an AU
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morion87 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015
In the grand schem of thing, this makes way more sense than the series. Luna always had a closer bond with their subjects than Celestia ever will( through her dreamwalking). Besides her magical potential, Twilight's name must've givin Luna hope that she could bring her sister back, and restore harmony to the land( since Twilight's name means bridging the gap between day and night.
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WeirdoPony Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015  Hobbyist
You have a good point about Luna's bond with her subjects being closer than Celestia's bond.
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would think so too.
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MaleficentFaerie Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I think Celestia, like Elsa, could be like a distant queen to her subjects, while Luna, like Anna, could be really close to others and be really down to earth! That's what I think. 
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IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting
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:iconthenarffy:
TheNarffy Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
Just looking back at this. Does it feel like I'm stalking your page at times? :P

Anyway, re-reading this, it seems really nice. Sad too.
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, thanks
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:iconthenarffy:
TheNarffy Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
No problem buddy. :aww:

And it does make me wonder what else would be different here. :XD:
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah. Same
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:iconthenarffy:
TheNarffy Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
Perhaps a future RP at some point. :P
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah!
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:iconthenarffy:
TheNarffy Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
Like...having other characters replace one another. Just think of the potential :P
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like it
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PrincessThaliaRose Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Booooooooo :P
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Umm... Ok?
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:iconthenarffy:
TheNarffy Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Does this mean it'd be the Solar Rebublic and Lunar Empire?
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG Yus!
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:iconthenarffy:
TheNarffy Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Lol! Is it generating RP ideas in ya?
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes...
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:iconthenarffy:
TheNarffy Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Ooo~ 

Do tell, what would this new universe of your's be like?
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm... Theo is the... Solar Democrat! Instead of Lunar Republican! lol
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:iconthenarffy:
TheNarffy Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Lol! :XD:

OOO! You should have used Sunset Shimmer instead of Twilight, since roles were reversed.
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HOLY CRAP! YUS! OH! OH OH OH! The other mane 6! WOW!
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Dekra234 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
this is awesome indeed ^^
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:icondekra234:
Dekra234 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
no problem ^^
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like this scenario.
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:icondekra234:
Dekra234 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
yes. its cool
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow!
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem.
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:iconsilverbrony97:
silverbrony97 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ha 
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol
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:iconsilverbrony97:
silverbrony97 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
role reveals 
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:icon3dwa21:
3dwa21 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
meanwhile in a not so paralell world..... ^^
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol
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:iconskylaryozora:
SkylarYozora Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I prefer this version Heart 
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
As do I. :)
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:iconradosbadger:
RadosBadger Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Does this mean Celestia was banished for a thousand years to the Sun? =P
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes
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schorpioen007 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Cool ^^
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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:iconschorpioen007:
schorpioen007 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
you're welcome
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DarkCog Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Luna! :heart:
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:) 
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:icondaderpster:
DADERPSTER Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student General Artist
First of all, both picture and description story were well done. But secondly...
"I won't let nothing happen to you ever again."

Maybe change "nothing" to "anything".

"I won't let anything happen to you ever again."

Just a suggestion. :)




I'msosorryIknowI'magrammarnazixD
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:iconiiicrewsalonian:
IIICrewsalonian Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Right... double negatives... My Spanish comes out, even in English... In Spanish, double negatives are allowed.
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:icondaderpster:
DADERPSTER Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem. I can admit I have the same problem with french and english ^^; 
I'm just trying to help. :iconfluttershysmileplz:
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